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Leaks - smalldeadinsect - Competition Entry

Leaks is a dual story about the origin of one love poem.

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Ratings

Presentation4.57
#12Fun3.38
#14Gameplay3.13
#17Coolness0%

Comments

Jun 27, 2011 @ 11:56pm

I change the default images of Undum later. So don't rate them, only the story.

Zillix says ...
Jun 28, 2011 @ 6:38am

I really liked the presentation and fluidity of the interaction with the story. Played through it twice, and really enjoyed it!

rhockman says ...
Jun 28, 2011 @ 11:19pm

Eeeh, muy bueno. Me costó un poco al principio entender como funcionaba la interacción con el juego, pero una vez que entendí me enganché muy mal.
Parece un final definitivo, así que sería muy copado ver otras historias.

Winterblood says ...
Jun 29, 2011 @ 12:01pm

Really powerful story, beautifully presented. The only suggestion I could add would be to make the personalized memories a bit more of a network, so you're never sure if you found them all. In a contest dominated by technical demos (my own entry included) this stands out as a work of true art. Thank you!

Jake Elliott says ...
Jun 30, 2011 @ 1:06am

Love the premise! Really good use of Undum.

Jun 30, 2011 @ 5:54am

Simply beautiful! Wonderful use of poetic verse, the intermingling of the past and present, the dialogue and memories. Haunting and artistic! Just great.

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