Ludum Dare 37 — December 9th-11th, 2016 — Theme: One Room

Well, Mike ran in to problems getting ldjam.com working properly with about 12 hours left in the Compo, so this is the backup plan.

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One Room for No One Anymore

by pokepetter - Compo Entry

Click the white circles to read text.
The game ends when the screen fades to black.

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Ratings

#98Graphics3.88
#329Mood3.06
#440Theme3.25
#610Overall2.44
#1705Coolness10%

Comments

relick says ...
Dec 12, 2016 @ 4:48pm

The painting is pretty but I don't really feel like the story was long enough to be engaging.

Big Cow says ...
Dec 15, 2016 @ 12:20am

Nice art, and the last lines got to me.

KunoNoOni says ...
Dec 15, 2016 @ 1:09am

I see what you were going for here and you have a good base, but the story needs to be a little longer than it was. The art is absolutely gorgeous and the beeping of the machine really set the mood it also solidifies the theme as well. Over all you did a good job and even though the story was short it was enjoyable. Well Done!

hijomo says ...
Dec 15, 2016 @ 3:13am

The art was good. It feels like the opening scene. would love to see more.

oab says ...
Dec 15, 2016 @ 6:34am

Interesting. I really want to know last dot say.

karlipoppins says ...
Dec 15, 2016 @ 7:37am

Super nice painting, I actually quite enjoyed the dialogues and was wondering if I was actually going to make it or not... Would have loved a bit of music to go with it, but actually the beeping of the machine just makes the whole atmosphere on its own so it's probably better that way. Good job

psychomonster says ...
Dec 17, 2016 @ 12:17pm

Very short... by a very good art style! I hoped to see a little bit more about what happend... The Sound was very loud... it crashed my ears :)

mrwillowb says ...
Dec 22, 2016 @ 5:09am

Pretty graphics need game play to match, it was a nice game.

ALobker says ...
Dec 30, 2016 @ 8:48pm

I died. I must be playing it wrong ;)

rburema says ...
Dec 30, 2016 @ 10:14pm

The way you dismiss the diaglog boxes is not quite clear; you have to click next to them.

... but it's really nice to see an experience like this between all the more 'gamey' games as well :-)

Y'know, this works as a standalone piece, but it could also be the intro to a sort of 'afterlife adventure' (that would be at the very least least slightly less serious, and I don't think that's what you where going for, but still...).

Quetzakol says ...
Dec 30, 2016 @ 10:23pm

Interesting, there is only one image but that is very good one ! Like others said, the story was way too short to be really engaging. Sadly there is no real game mechanics too. Nice mood too although the beeping was a little bit too annoying.

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