Ludum Dare 37 — December 9th-11th, 2016 — Theme: One Room

Well, Mike ran in to problems getting ldjam.com working properly with about 12 hours left in the Compo, so this is the backup plan.

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There is a Light

by Bahiyya - Jam Entry

This is a Twine game. It deals with how a room can be a person or God or anything you need it to be. It's short so please play it!

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PartyPanda5 says ...
Dec 13, 2016 @ 7:56pm

I think there are so many emotions within this that you can explore even further. I love it!

Bensonance says ...
Dec 14, 2016 @ 6:47pm

This is lovely!

It's like a little interactive poem :). I like the way you varied the sentence lengths, and also how at the end you broke up the paragraphs into multiple links.

The writing is very rich and illustrative. Because it's so rich, it can be overpowering. You sort of need to be eased into it maybe? Perhaps simpler sentences should have gone sooner, with plainer images, with richer stuff building as you go along?

I could imagine a whole series of these littler Twine poems :)

Tuism says ...
Dec 15, 2016 @ 6:46am

Poetic expression. That's cool.

I couldn't find sense in it, but that's how expression works, it's so personal to you that that's what it is, and without dialogue and engagement there's only vacuous guessing.

I'm guessing it's about a girl/boy. Or a bunch of them. I would be right 80% of the time, but it doesn't matter, because what you want from this was your expression, not my understanding. If you wanted my understanding, you would have done something that made me understand.

So, cool expression.

Gabe says ...
Dec 17, 2016 @ 12:57am

Never been a fan of twine games, but this one is special. It's really well made compared to what I've seen before. Really interesting story (confusing too, but that's OK). Really good job!

Bahiyya says ...
Dec 18, 2016 @ 9:28pm

Dear Gabe.

OH MY GOD THANK YOU SO MUCH. That's really lovely of you to say.

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