Ludum Dare 35 — April 15th-18th, 2016 — Theme: Shapeshift

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My Rachel

by nwestninja - Jam Entry

My Rachel is a Twine adventure that revolves around two figures: Rachel MacCormack--a beloved young woman who died in a mysterious car accident--and a mysterious figure who obsesses over the last night of her life. Taking the role of this unstable would-be paramour, the player uses his strange shapeshifting abilities to worm his way into the secrets that cling to the seemingly peaceful small town of Floyd River, and ultimately uncovers a disturbing truth that waits just below the churning water.

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dammit says ...
Apr 19, 2016 @ 6:39pm

Muted the music - it's irritating when trying to read. The premise of being able to turn into anyone is quite a literal and straight forward take on the theme...which is okay i guess... but I do like solving a murder.

zondarg says ...
Apr 21, 2016 @ 11:39pm

Oh, yes! I liked this one, great mood and the music and the sound effects fit nicely (I turned down the volume a bit..) Well written murder mystery, good plot, reminded me a bit of Infocoms "The Witness". Good work!!!

Benjamin-L says ...
Apr 22, 2016 @ 3:47am

This is very well done! You did an incredibly good job creating a mood here through both the text and the sound. I really liked the way that you had to guess what various people would reasonably say although I think it could have been a bit more in depth with this part. This is one of the best submissions I have played so far. Great job!

Henry00 says ...
Apr 22, 2016 @ 8:46pm

Awesome idea, with that many writers that must have taken a lot of team effort.

medidog says ...
Apr 22, 2016 @ 8:50pm

Loved how you worked the theme into this mystery story. Very fun to play too. Great entry!

celia14 says ...
Apr 22, 2016 @ 10:52pm

Wow, this is great. I had a similar idea, actually, but thought "That's too hard to do well" - but you did it well. The evidence was very well done, and it was engaging to try playing the different characters. (I liked the different colors for the different characters.)

The suspenseful, almost-normal but actually creepy tone was great. I accused the murderer, but I wonder, is there an ending that reveals more about who the main character is and why he(?) is obsessed with Rachel? What did the numbers 546/7 mean at the end? Maybe I missed something.

Anyway, nice work!

nihilaleph says ...
Apr 23, 2016 @ 12:31am

Pretty cool! Nice story, mood and usage of the theme in a text-based game! Great entry!

Kate Kligman says ...
Apr 24, 2016 @ 9:46pm

I liked the music and the detective aspects of the story. It was short enough to hold my attention and long enough to feel like a complete game.

runvs says ...
Apr 27, 2016 @ 5:49pm

Very well done. I like the music!

Gord10 says ...
Apr 27, 2016 @ 6:39pm

WOW! I loved it! I'm giving 5 stars (except for humor) for all categories.

Yumeito says ...
May 6, 2016 @ 8:51pm

Nice Game:)

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