Ludum Dare 33 — August 21st-24th, 2015 — Theme: You are the Monster

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Using All Parts

by timeloopedpowergamer - Compo Entry

Waking from a long sleep, the monster hungers. It must feed carefully but also quickly, tending its flock even as it devours them.

Customize your monster, then stalk and feed on helpless beings in this woefully incomplete text adventure.

*edited 08.27

Working slowly on a post-Compo version. Fixes coming for token issues, replaces stats with descriptions, and has full feature completeness on all pages. Will link here when the next version is ready.

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SudoDave says ...
Aug 24, 2015 @ 3:23am

Definately seams interesting!
I did run into a bug where one dynamic bit of text was an unexpected token, but it's not game breaking.

ferdbold says ...
Aug 24, 2015 @ 3:23am

I had fun while it lasted, haha. Did not really get the RPG part at the end but the first screen had me laughing :)

Cynapse says ...
Aug 24, 2015 @ 4:01am

Other than an unexpected token, I had lots of fun with this game :)

Aug 25, 2015 @ 2:38pm

Yeah, no.

Flygamer101 says ...
Aug 26, 2015 @ 10:50pm

For those who don't know, ThomeTheMagician is just commenting a negative comment because he created a copied game that broke several compo rules, and he is copying negative reviews by other users on his game to theirs. This game is legit, while his isn't.

cjke.7777 says ...
Aug 31, 2015 @ 5:37am

Nice. Generally not a fan of text games (I'm lazy) but nice still

Mach60KAS says ...
Sep 7, 2015 @ 3:23pm

"Double-click this passage to edit it."

Apart from that, quite a nice, atmospheric entry. Ending felt a little bit forced, and I'm unsure why the NPCs had health and clothing scores but still pretty good overall. Good work!

superfreak says ...
Sep 13, 2015 @ 1:38pm

Overall interesting entry - great mood and interesting progression - great job for such a short time!

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