Ludum Dare 33 — August 21st-24th, 2015 — Theme: You are the Monster

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Evil Papagalli

by folex70 - Jam Entry

eat some cream crackers and shot some fireballs with evil papagali

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commands

ASDF -> Moviments
Space bar -> Jump
left CTRL or left Mouse Button -> Shot

Downloads and Links


Ratings

Coolness67%
#684Audio(Jam)1.50
#894Humor(Jam)1.96
#979Graphics(Jam)2.18
#1051Mood(Jam)1.77
#1057Innovation(Jam)1.61
#1092Fun(Jam)1.94
#1093Theme(Jam)1.91
#1128Overall(Jam)1.94

Comments

Zerkruemler says ...
Aug 24, 2015 @ 3:20pm

Controls are totally wierd. It is not possible to jump accurately. This is a no-go for a jump-and-run game in my opinion.

folex70 says ...
Aug 24, 2015 @ 5:17pm

thanks for play and comment @Zerkruemler
i stay working for improve this game play.

EmanP says ...
Aug 24, 2015 @ 5:37pm

I keep glitching in the tiles... Did you place these manually?

folex70 says ...
Aug 24, 2015 @ 5:48pm

@EmanP yeah some tiles have a colider per 32x32 tiles, and this make stuck. i fixed in 85% of map, but some places happens this. i stay working for fix all map.

Thanks for play and Comment!

kidando says ...
Aug 24, 2015 @ 6:13pm

I didn't get far enough to know if there are enemies to shoot. The controls are not very friendly though. I'm sure some polishing will give you a foundation for a good platformer

folex70 says ...
Aug 24, 2015 @ 7:02pm

@kidando
thanks for play!

afisicos says ...
Aug 24, 2015 @ 8:07pm

It's a simple game. Not bad, but it can be much better.
Anyways, it made me laught, just for the title. Good job.

folex70 says ...
Aug 24, 2015 @ 8:09pm

@afisicos

thanks for play!!

TurtleP says ...
Aug 24, 2015 @ 8:32pm

Controls are nice, but the movement speed makes you slide easily making jumps hard.

Aug 24, 2015 @ 8:45pm

Cool game and cool parrot! :) A bit hard that the parrot get stuck in the grass so easily, keep up the good work!

folex70 says ...
Aug 24, 2015 @ 8:55pm

thanks for play @TurtleP and @oskardevelopment

Literal Games says ...
Aug 25, 2015 @ 1:13pm

Nice start! Fix the controls and the sliding and you could have a good game here!

Aug 25, 2015 @ 1:16pm

Really hard level you have there!
I had to try like 20 times to make it and i was not even able to collect all crackers!

Yet I still have to find out why the parrot is evil...

Keep up the good work!

DarthThomas says ...
Aug 25, 2015 @ 1:18pm

Graphics looks good, but contols are strange and I don't see how this game fits the theme.

folex70 says ...
Aug 25, 2015 @ 1:25pm

thanks for play @Literal Games @Team Klappermann and @DarthThomas

Aug 25, 2015 @ 2:03pm

Hi folex!
Thank you for your comment!
Can you try again? I added a dropbox link. But I have no problems using the other link.
Have a nice day =)

congusbongus says ...
Aug 26, 2015 @ 12:27pm

The controls are a bit floaty; I love the main character design, very cute!

MrKOHCEPBAHT says ...
Aug 26, 2015 @ 12:29pm

Too hardcore for me//. So hard to jump properly.

folex70 says ...
Aug 26, 2015 @ 10:25pm

thanks for play!@congusbongus @MrKOHCEPBAHT

NoWandStudios says ...
Aug 27, 2015 @ 7:01am

The parrot was cute but I think that the game was better if jump was more efficent

martymon says ...
Aug 27, 2015 @ 7:07am

Decent graphics. But controls need to be tighter... my parrot is going all over the place. There are some sections where my movement is prevented even though there is no tile on it. Also, not clear why I'm shooting? Are there enemies later on?

folex70 says ...
Aug 27, 2015 @ 12:37pm

thanks @martymon for play this! I still working for improving this gameplay!

MrKOHCEPBAHT says ...
Aug 27, 2015 @ 12:43pm

Finally beat it.

What can I say?
1. Add some friction on physics material of platforms or papagaii. This is actually what makes jumps so hard - papagaii slide for 3-4 squares after jump if not stoped.
2. Remove rigidbodies from crackers. Maybe change their colliders to trigers (or not, if shooting at them is some gameplay mechanics).
3. Add some enemies. It's not that hard.

folex70 says ...
Aug 27, 2015 @ 3:07pm

@MrKOHCEPBAHT and @NoWandStudios thanks for play and comment! Im glad for this feedback

amortus says ...
Aug 29, 2015 @ 2:32am

Joguei o jogo ouvindo a música do evil papagali!

folex70 says ...
Aug 30, 2015 @ 10:05am

obrigado por jogar @amortus
pensei em colocar a musica junto com o jogo mas fiquei preocupado com os direitos autorias kkkk
valeu!

reiknight says ...
Aug 31, 2015 @ 6:45pm

You are not a monster, you are an adorable bird. There are some bugs in the columns and the kinematics are a bit weird, but with more work can be a good game.

Strike says ...
Sep 5, 2015 @ 10:22am

I totally agree with MrKOHCEPBAHT
That's a good attemps that could make a good game once all these details are improved. Congrats !

Stending says ...
Sep 9, 2015 @ 5:30pm

Agreed with everyone, that's really nice for a first try! Keep it up!

folex70 says ...
Sep 10, 2015 @ 8:30pm

thanks @Stending @Strike @reiknight for play and comment!

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