Ludum Dare 33 — August 21st-24th, 2015 — Theme: You are the Monster

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Soul Ownership

by lowercaserho - Compo Entry

An interactive fiction game and story written with Twine 2 under the Harlowe story format.

This turned out a little bit more fiction and a little less interactive than I had hoped for, but I'm generally pleased with the result.

Since this is Twine 2, the game page itself also doubles as the source/project file, and can be imported and edited.

Downloads and Links


Ratings

Coolness56%
#73Mood3.78
#228Theme3.75
#296Overall3.34
#578Innovation2.82
#634Humor2.32
#677Fun2.71

Comments

quill18 says ...
Aug 24, 2015 @ 3:22am

Creepy and awesome. Played it through to the end and was happy I did.

ianh says ...
Aug 24, 2015 @ 4:37am

Very well-written! The door code part was a bit tedious, but otherwise this was quite fun.

Phil Strahl says ...
Aug 24, 2015 @ 4:41am

Very well written and touching story, I enjoyed it very much. And thanks for making me feel clever for finding out the door code :) Also interesting twist, thanks for your entry!

andyman404 says ...
Aug 24, 2015 @ 4:48am

Great story. I figured out the door code on the first try, given the clues. Thank you for this story!

filiph says ...
Aug 24, 2015 @ 6:06am

I loved this. It took a while to get going, but after it did, I was thrilled.

The writing is excellent. The part with the footage gave me serious chills. And the whole experience is super polished (not only for a LD game, but in general).

qkerguelen says ...
Aug 24, 2015 @ 6:13am

Wow, the story was really cool, I couldn't stop reading! Great job, very good entry and well written!

Crowbeak says ...
Aug 24, 2015 @ 7:29am

Good use of theme and very well-written. Only dampened by my solid dislike of cats.

KunoNoOni says ...
Aug 25, 2015 @ 12:05am

That was twisted... But I loved it! HaHa! Good use of theme.

rotpar says ...
Aug 25, 2015 @ 4:39am

Nice writing, very atmospheric.

Aug 27, 2015 @ 1:22am

Really good writing. Nice work!

Jawesome says ...
Sep 2, 2015 @ 3:29am

Sad, Theme-related, fun, twisty, puzzle... everything. I absolutely loved it.

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