Ludum Dare 33 — August 21st-24th, 2015 — Theme: You are the Monster

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One Hungry Monster

by Dialglex - Compo Entry

Your cute little monster is very hungry, and gets more hungry over time. Eat the tasty humans to quench your hunger! This is my second LD, and I am 12.

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Ratings

#2273Coolness10%

Comments

Dialglex says ...
Aug 23, 2015 @ 10:09am

Feel free to leave your thoughts, but remember I am only twelve and I am not very experienced with programming.

Sadale says ...
Aug 23, 2015 @ 11:44am

Interesting. It's not bad for a 12 years old. Good job!
When you eat a red guy, no sound is played. Not sure whether it's by design or a bug.

Dialglex says ...
Aug 24, 2015 @ 6:52am

@Sadale: Thanks! I think it must be a bug... *turns away embarrassed*

TiByte says ...
Aug 24, 2015 @ 11:22am

I rated this game quite high. But you need to change something about the sounds.

Dialglex says ...
Aug 25, 2015 @ 9:32am

@TiByte: What do I need to change about the sounds? You have not told me what is wrong with them.

Drauthius says ...
Aug 30, 2015 @ 2:01pm

Would have been nice with some obstacles or something making it harder to feast. Nice graphics. :)

ironleonem says ...
Sep 5, 2015 @ 6:23am

First off, I just want to say congratulations. What you've achieved at 12 years old is, arguably, better than my entry :) Excellently done. That being said, I'm going to be open and honest about my feedback. The negatives I mentioned... don't take them as something you've done wrong, because, like I said, what you've achieved at your age is incredible.

Here's what I liked:
You definitely show a good head for mechanics. For a fun two minute time killer, this has enjoyable mechanics. I really liked the car powerup you put in the game, and I think technically, this game is incredibly sound.

Here's what I wasn't a huge fan of:
The gameplay is a little dry after a while. While the car did help to shake up the experience for me, I felt as though you could add more to pull the user back in after one play through. Maybe after 30 seconds, the army shows up to shoot at the monster? Something like that. Also, perhaps a random background might add some replayability.

Again, over all, your product was excellent. I can't wait to see what you come up with next time :)

blaster391 says ...
Sep 11, 2015 @ 3:09pm

I enjoyed this entry and survived 153 seconds :)

Like people have said, I thought you weren't meant to eat the red guy cos he made no sound...

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