Ludum Dare 33 — August 21st-24th, 2015 — Theme: You are the Monster

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Super Detective

by Pyrofoux - Compo Entry

THE LAMEST TWINE THING THAT I DARE TO CALL A GAME, NOW ON PC !

FEATURES :

- MORE THAN THREE DIFFERENT CLICHÉ ENDINGS
- LESS THAN FIVE AND A HALF DIFFERENT PLOT TWISTS
- ME
- TEXT
- LETTERS
- LINKS
- PUNCTUATION
- THREE COLORS
- TIPOS
- 3D HD MODELS
- FALSE ADVERTISING
- CAPSLOCK
- "HUMOR"

PLAY NOW !
OR LATER !
SOONER IS IMPOSSIBLE UNLESS YOU'RE A TIME TRAVELLER !

Downloads and Links


Ratings

#59Humor3.81
#426Mood3.05
#507Fun2.96
#674Theme3.04
#738Overall2.80
#744Innovation2.54
#1415Coolness45%

Comments

napoleon says ...
Aug 23, 2015 @ 12:45am

ok then !

Pyrofoux says ...
Aug 23, 2015 @ 6:55pm

Wow this game is so cool, the author is a genius even the description is funny ! Even the comments are funny !

- Anonymous

RoboNebula says ...
Aug 23, 2015 @ 9:17pm

This game is hilarious! 12/7 for humor!

Pierrec says ...
Aug 23, 2015 @ 9:19pm

It's funny, and the proof you should do more twine games (and improve your english a bit, but I certainly can't blame you for that)

TiByte says ...
Aug 24, 2015 @ 11:25am

Did break the fourth wall a bit too often for my taste.

hissssssssss says ...
Aug 25, 2015 @ 2:17am

I can't tell if the author is a non-native speaker or just took a masterclass in bizarre internet memetic grammar butchery, but the result was surprisingly funny either way.

Dianouille says ...
Aug 26, 2015 @ 9:25am

God that was hilarious. But I'm sure you can add more cliché in the story hahaha.

Aug 26, 2015 @ 4:04pm

Excellent punctuation

rodobodolfo says ...
Sep 5, 2015 @ 10:28am

This game is stupid, which i like! It made me laugh quite a few times. Seductive Peter made me laugh the most, haha.

hunttis says ...
Sep 5, 2015 @ 8:14pm

Stupid, but still made me go to every ending, so.. not bad :D

Made me smirk, which is already a good sign :)

dollarone says ...
Sep 8, 2015 @ 10:48am

hah pretty funny stuff. Very meta and random. I like it :)

bossmojoman says ...
Sep 9, 2015 @ 12:20pm

I rarely consider Twine games games, but well freaking done mister detective..... or should I say .... [spoiler alert]

Catmoo says ...
Sep 14, 2015 @ 10:25pm

I love seeing games made in Twine, enjoyed giving your game a go :)

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