Ludum Dare 33 — August 21st-24th, 2015 — Theme: You are the Monster

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Your Friendly Neighborhood Monster

by Shugor - Jam Entry

--Ludum Dare 33 Jam Entry: Your Friendly Neighborhood Monster--

So i kinda spent most of the weekend making the engine and art work properly and forgot about the ACTUAL game content;;
But that's not a big problem. I like what we made even if its only really a few minutes long and is completely linear. Hopefully I get around to doing a postjam version.
The only real button is Z, to advance text.
I hope you enjoy what we got!

Downloads and Links


Ratings

#98Graphics(Jam)4.33
#287Theme(Jam)3.75
#290Mood(Jam)3.43
#443Humor(Jam)2.94
#548Overall(Jam)3.19
#695Fun(Jam)2.84
#753Innovation(Jam)2.72
#1752Coolness36%

Comments

Twinters says ...
Aug 25, 2015 @ 3:58am

What a cute little story! Loved the twist on the theme and the pixelart looks really great :D

Caspila says ...
Aug 25, 2015 @ 7:44pm

why no mac!! game looks so interesting!

A_K_ says ...
Aug 25, 2015 @ 7:46pm

no web/osx :(

madalaski says ...
Aug 25, 2015 @ 7:54pm

While there is sadly no game content, the art style, story and mood of it all do partially make up for that. It has some good potential and I would love to see it continued...

athaclena says ...
Aug 25, 2015 @ 8:04pm

Nice story, the art was great, and it was really slick to play through. Good luck if you do more!

duskpn says ...
Aug 25, 2015 @ 8:04pm

Your writing style is really nice =) and the art is extremely cute!! Please continue, I'm curious!

Shugor says ...
Aug 26, 2015 @ 5:20am

Sorry about that! couldn't get a web export working but added an OS/X version for those wanting it.

thebmxeur says ...
Aug 26, 2015 @ 1:57pm

Please change the sound of the text ^^

ziege says ...
Aug 26, 2015 @ 7:27pm

I really wanna know the rest of the story...

glerikud says ...
Aug 26, 2015 @ 7:31pm

Nice little graphic novel, the art is beautiful. Also the switching from the environment to the close-up of Lola is a good trick.

We've got a text based story game too! Alhough that's not very cute...

OadT says ...
Aug 27, 2015 @ 10:19am

Nice visual novel, too bad you didn't finished it, I will check out the postjam version :)

Ramiel says ...
Aug 27, 2015 @ 4:22pm

I hate clifhangers...
But the graphics and writing are awesome. Include some actual gameplay and it would definitely be worth a post-jam version.

VDZ says ...
Aug 28, 2015 @ 12:10am

The story was interesting (the writing style appealed to me despite the large amount of typos and other errors), but it was blatantly unfinished. As is, you can barely call it a story because we pretty much only get the protagonist introduction and then it ends already.

I liked the art. The protagonist's speech sound was too high-pitched and sharp and was unpleasant to listen to; the rest of the sound was okay. The take on the theme is rather straightforward, but at least a proper straightforward interpretation is better than a failed twist on the theme.

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