Ludum Dare 31 — December 5th-8th, 2014 — Theme: Entire Game on One Screen

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P.I.

by burlapjack - Jam Entry

P.I. is a story about a private investigator after a case gone bad. The main character finds his p.i. office surrounded by those who he plans to bring to justice and must fight to survive.

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#2296Coolness10%

Comments

mmoustafa says ...
Dec 9, 2014 @ 6:04am

This game feels like it has potential, but there's definitely a lot of room for improvement.

It gets very repetitive fairly quickly. Perhaps having the enemies come from more doors, (and having different kinds of enemies. Maybe give him limited ammo so the game isn't so easy?)

A little polish goes a long way. Having the enemies flash white instead of just disappearing can make the game feel a lot better.

This is a great presentation to look at about how adding these little tricks to a game (especially a shooter) can make a huge difference! Start at around the 7 minute mark https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AJdEqssNZ-U

BlueTheLemon says ...
Dec 9, 2014 @ 8:18pm

Congratulation for making this game !
Can't say anything more than Mmoustafa ! SFX would have added a lot. Great work !

dieblume86 says ...
Dec 10, 2014 @ 9:30am

Nice start.

Sanguine says ...
Dec 12, 2014 @ 10:01pm

I'm gonna agree with mmoustafa. The game already had an interesting mood though, and you could definitely play with that some more :)

SuperDisk says ...
Dec 12, 2014 @ 10:07pm

Yeah, it does have potential. I thought it was hilarious that those mobsters must have brought a freakin' parade to this guy's office, and the only logical thing for him to do is just mow them down (with a pistol, no less.)

Humor 5/5, if not unintentionally. :)

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