Ludum Dare 30 — August 22nd-25th, 2014 — Theme: Connected Worlds

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by Greg Klein - 48 Hour Compo Entry

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dadman says ...
Aug 25, 2014 @ 12:46pm

I really enjoyed this game! I'm the best wing-animal ever!
I don't really see how it fits in with the theme 'Connected worlds' though. Apart from that, high ratings!
Tempted to play again and do everything to split the two people up, but I think that'd just make me sad more than anything...

Greg Klein says ...
Aug 25, 2014 @ 1:19pm

@dadman, thanks for the feedback. I was going add sound which would have helped tie it to the theme a lot more, but I didn't have enough time. For example, all the talking from the man and woman would have sounded garbled at first, then as you connected with the man you would be able to distinguish your name and other words in the dialog.

PaperBlurt says ...
Aug 25, 2014 @ 7:14pm

A dog simulator!
All in all real good.
Maybe a bit to wall-of-text like, but really not a problem.

I love maybe a sequel?

Greg Klein says ...
Aug 26, 2014 @ 1:42am

@Paperblurt: Yeah, there are a few walls of text in there. I did have timed inserts in the story but didn't have enough time to make sure they were all timed correctly, so I removed them.

There will definitely be more animal games. I'm not a huge fan of cats, but I'm sure I'll make another game with a dog in it soon.

Ellian says ...
Aug 26, 2014 @ 8:10am

Good story, and I liked how you more or less -felt- like a dog. A shame there weren't more options though, it was a little too straightforward. :(
Good stuff anyway!

oranebeast says ...
Aug 26, 2014 @ 8:17am

A great tale, Those shoes though. And I understood the connection two. Its hard to explain though.

Cake&Code says ...
Aug 26, 2014 @ 8:26am

Haha, another wing-animal here! That guy was lucky to have me. Nudging him forward at every turn :D

pighead10 says ...
Aug 26, 2014 @ 4:48pm

A bit straightforward, but a dog simulator! I haven't played one of these in days!

mrspeaker says ...
Aug 26, 2014 @ 4:53pm

Great writing - very captivating and well-paced. Also, great take on the theme!

commodoreKid says ...
Aug 26, 2014 @ 5:35pm

Nice story but that's quite all. Would love more interactivity in this kind of game.

Snoother says ...
Aug 26, 2014 @ 10:38pm

A gorgeous game gorgeously presented. The interactivity actually felt about right for me: just enough to maintain player interest but always focused on the story, which is what this game's really about. However, if you include timed sequences in a future version as you say, I think it would improve pacing.

LaFleur says ...
Aug 27, 2014 @ 5:29am

This was a fun read/play! Good job!

bluemaroo3 says ...
Aug 27, 2014 @ 5:51pm

Beautiful story, well presented. Kept me captivated.

Greg Klein says ...
Aug 27, 2014 @ 5:54pm

Thank you for the feedback, everyone! I'll work on it some more once I get my sleep back to normal and let you all know when I upload it.

elefantopia says ...
Sep 1, 2014 @ 10:57pm

Great writing!

ZYXer says ...
Sep 2, 2014 @ 10:46pm

Wow! Amazing story!

I like how you used the theme to connect the dog's world with the human world.

tbam says ...
Sep 3, 2014 @ 12:15am

Cool story, some music would have made this really killer

SteveSalmond says ...
Sep 3, 2014 @ 10:53am

Nice! I felt distinctly canine for a little while there.. Odd sensation. :)

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