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#TeamNeel is myself (Michael Neel), Rachel Neel, Hannah Neel, and Cicelie Neel.
We took the theme "Beneath the Surface" as a reference to hidden or double meanings, which lead to the noir setting.
Interact with the mouse and left mouse button.
Downloads and Links
Ratings
| #5 | Audio(Jam) | 4.42 |
| #8 | Humor(Jam) | 4.27 |
| #90 | Fun(Jam) | 3.56 |
| #118 | Mood(Jam) | 3.69 |
| #174 | Overall(Jam) | 3.52 |
| #356 | Innovation(Jam) | 3.04 |
| #373 | Theme(Jam) | 3.15 |
| #582 | Graphics(Jam) | 2.81 |
| #1746 | Coolness | 37% |
Comments
That was awesome! Even if the gameplay is pretty limited, I loved the dialogues, music and voice acting. Good job team :)
I liked the story, made me smile :) Some feedback on what I picked up might be nice. Well done
Ha, really cool writing and voice acting shot through with a nice line in humour - made me happy.
This was an interesting game! Although it didn't really feel that interactive, it was pretty good. I loved the dialogue, I laughed multiple times.
Well I think this is the best story I've come across in the jam well done. Also I also kinda liked the graphics.
Really funny, and the music fit perfectly. I would've liked more interactivity, though. Good job!
The voices in general were weak. Litterally weak. Be more confident, and put some power behind them. You can definitely do it.
The overall game was fine. Simple, but enjoyable and humorous.
Good work.
Very nice storytelling - would have loved more puzzles. But looks like the start of some adventure-games ;)
Loved the story, characters and that you went with a voice driven game. One of the only ones I've seen this jam. And great music and atmosphere too. Well done :)
Nice story and music. The point and click until you win gameplay element is simple but lets the story unfold.
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The humor, voice acting, and credits screen are great. It's a novel interpretation of the theme.