Ludum Dare 29 — April 25th-28th Weekend — Theme: Beneath the Surface

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by bentosmile - 48 Hour Compo Entry

This is a game of extreme teen angst! It's a visual novel, so the controls are pretty simple:

SPACE: advance text
ENTER: confirm/advance text
ARROW KEYS: pick option
ESCAPE: quit
F: toggle fullscreen (off by default)

Note - I didn't spend much energy on this game. It's primarily for fun, and not so much a test of my limits. :) Still, enjoy! It should be playable in 5 minutes at the most.

Source is included in the game.

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Pierrec says ...
Apr 28, 2014 @ 1:03am

Not your best game of course but I enjoyed it and it surprised me. twice. in a 2 seconds intervals. cool.

jtpup0 says ...
Apr 28, 2014 @ 3:47am

Did not see that coming in the end xD, great game nonetheless

madhoe says ...
Apr 28, 2014 @ 3:50am

Oh my god. THE SURPRISE.

Liens says ...
Apr 28, 2014 @ 3:52am

Nice take on the theme. Not sure what that thing was though, maybe aliens.

Jonochrome says ...
Apr 28, 2014 @ 3:55am

I got so engaged in that, and then--abrupt lovely confusion. That was quite enjoyable.

Dreii says ...
Apr 28, 2014 @ 4:56am

Lol! I love how the friend is just like, "Oh, why diddnt you tell me sooner? ok bye." Nice suprise though :)

badlydrawnrod says ...
Apr 28, 2014 @ 4:31pm

Kafka would be proud!

kratorspore says ...
Apr 28, 2014 @ 4:37pm

Hehe nice! That was sure unexpected! Nicely done.

smikulcik says ...
Apr 28, 2014 @ 4:39pm

Nice twist at the end.

lorniebear says ...
Apr 28, 2014 @ 4:43pm

I like the graphics! :)

trueyomic says ...
Apr 28, 2014 @ 4:45pm

It pulls you in to give you an interesting surprise at the end. The best part of this game was the graphics. I always like games with multiple endings, so that was a plus.

KayZ says ...
Apr 28, 2014 @ 4:47pm

There needs to be a category for storytelling or something :). Even played twice to see different dialog and endings.

Khopa says ...
Apr 28, 2014 @ 6:58pm

Boy, that escalated quickly !

muramasa says ...
Apr 28, 2014 @ 7:15pm

YEEEEEEEHHH! I'm an evil creature! I enjoyed it, like, every part of it. Except for the sound, because it doesn't has any.

xgeovanni says ...
Apr 28, 2014 @ 7:17pm

That ending is up there with The Usual Suspects and Virtue's Last Reward.

Also: Boom, voice acting:
(Feel free to contact me with job offers. I won't get out of bed for less that $80 000).

burgerdare says ...
Apr 28, 2014 @ 7:36pm

pretty cool, although I should note that white text on a yellow background is often not a superb choice.

fullmontis says ...
Apr 28, 2014 @ 8:55pm

That made me WTF pretty hard in the end. I really enjoy the graphics, really pleasant on the eyes.

Apr 28, 2014 @ 9:22pm

That ending D:
Brilliant work on the extreme teen angst part.. I feel so disgusted with the way the character is disgusted with herself that it actually made it make more sense if you know what I mean.

PaperBlurt says ...
Apr 29, 2014 @ 9:14am

First manga styled game in this LD I've spotted so far.
Nice little game!

Jeremias says ...
Apr 29, 2014 @ 12:06pm

This end xD nice one.

HybridMind says ...
Apr 29, 2014 @ 11:22pm

I liked the surprise at the end. A tale of alienation becomes more literal! ;) Nice capturing of teen angst in the dialog. I was just clicking right along reading up the story, totally sucked into it.

Noah Ratcliff says ...
Apr 29, 2014 @ 11:41pm

That was so deep and then all of the sudden just what. Played through again, sad I got the same path even though I changed my responses. Still a great game!

Halbernacht says ...
Apr 30, 2014 @ 11:42pm

Wasn't expecting to see another VN in Ludum Dare. Really liked the twist and twist's design.

Delca says ...
May 1, 2014 @ 10:07am

I just LOVED the graphic style. Wish I could draw like this (I am awful with human-shaped things).
It is a shame that there is only one ending, because I would have gladly played through it multiple time to find them all (which I already did, and always got the same ending).
Great job anyway, loved it!

Moosefly says ...
May 1, 2014 @ 12:44pm

The simplistic graphics style worked wonders, but for me the story wasn't all that compelling. Too bad I also spoiled myself a bit on the other comments :(.


Nichii says ...
May 1, 2014 @ 12:48pm

Nice game. Now, only if there is multiple endings :P

solkar says ...
May 1, 2014 @ 12:50pm

I know some people exactly like that.

VictoryGarden says ...
May 2, 2014 @ 6:47am

I... really liked this. I thought the main character was just transgendered and severely depressed at first, and then... that twist *_* I actually don't have much of anything to add as far as concrit--the game looks great, with good color design and well-chosen images. It may be tiny, but I think it was just the right size for the scope, the twist, and the ideas at hand. A nice game, and I appreciated that you put in multiple endings for such a small project.

Now I want to go take a look at your work for the other competitions! Thank you. This was a nice breather in-between everything else.

May 2, 2014 @ 6:20pm

Cool game, I really enjoyed it. I was missing some sound/music, but still... ;) I made a game by the same name, but yours is better, of course!

King_Mew says ...
May 3, 2014 @ 8:18pm

I loved it. The ending caught me off guard :P

rfgpfeiffer says ...
May 4, 2014 @ 3:50pm

Hey bentosmile! I immediately recognized your style on the tiny thumbnail screenshot. I have played your visual novels on my Ouya. Air Pressure was - "fun" is not the right word - really engaging.

Nanolotl says ...
May 12, 2014 @ 2:48am

Great ending

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