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The world of Marceline

by Pitoum - 48 Hour Compo Entry

** I'm french. Not an excuse but a fact. I will correct ALL THE MISTAKES after the vote. Sorry. **

Not really finished, but I had to submit something this time. For the 1000 :)

There isn't really an ending right now. Doesn't work :( Maybe after the vote ?

This story is inspired by the life of Marceline Loridan-Ivens. An awsome woman.

UP : Look at
LETTERS : Answer the questions

Hope you'll enjoy it a bit.

Edit : I'd added the source, but it's an improved version (I forget to keep an old version of it.)

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Pitoum says ...
Apr 23, 2012 @ 12:08am

BTW : Story inspired by Marceline Loridan-Ivens !

Pierrec says ...
Apr 23, 2012 @ 11:12am

"Happy birds were singing all around" ^^
The game is weird (in my mind, it means : good). You found a great way to tell a story. Of course, it lacks some polish but I was genuinely happy to play ot

repstyle says ...
Apr 23, 2012 @ 1:08pm

NIce work there ! I like the mood in there and the main character pace.
Just a bit experimental like i love.

Pitoum says ...
Apr 23, 2012 @ 6:11pm

Thanks guys :)
I'm working right now to improve it (and correct all the mistakes :$).

Lythom says ...
Apr 24, 2012 @ 6:37pm

Pretty dark (in the story), needs polish but... wahhh ! It makes feel different.
Unusual story for a game coupled with innovative story telling makes this game a very refreshing experience.
Thanks for that, good job there.

Meedoc says ...
Apr 25, 2012 @ 12:42pm

Even if it's need polish the overall experience is really pleasant! Nice job!

Jack says ...
Apr 25, 2012 @ 8:48pm

this is weird, depressing and ultimately very interesting. I'd love it if it was a bit more polished

ilo says ...
Apr 25, 2012 @ 11:20pm

Thought-provoking. Fun N/A.

FredericRP says ...
Apr 26, 2012 @ 3:05pm

Challenge completed !
It was hard to see if I answered right or wrong (but is there right or wrong answer really here ?), but I tried again to test different answers: we strongly feel the mood of the character, that's very well done.

FredericRP says ...
Apr 26, 2012 @ 3:07pm

(by the way.. that's strange to enter 'q' on an azerty keyboard to answer 'a')

racarate says ...
Apr 26, 2012 @ 11:32pm

Outstanding, one of my favorite entries so far. If only you had music! Or maybe that was intentional...

Pitoum says ...
Apr 29, 2012 @ 9:48pm

Thanks all !
I'm currently working on an improved version of the game (I will release it on Kongregate I think).
It's WIP here : http://serv003.pitoum.net/worldofmarceline/

@ilo : Yeah no fun I give you that :)

@racarate : I didn't have the time to add music. Now there is but i'm not sure it's a good thing :)

@Jack : Hope you'll like the new stuff !

@Fred : Not really a good way right now. It'll be a few different endings though.

uberneen says ...
Apr 30, 2012 @ 9:43pm

My first thought was, "I'm a slightly less androgynous David Bowie!"
It didn't take long for that to pass. I'd love to see you do a little more with this. It's already a very deep and moving experience, a little polish would make it powerful indeed.

wibblymat says ...
Apr 30, 2012 @ 11:37pm

Didn't give a humor rating. Didn't seem appropriate!

Fireblend says ...
May 1, 2012 @ 2:44am

So, not sure how to rate this, but whatever it was you made, you did a very fine job.

Nick Cash says ...
May 1, 2012 @ 3:54am

Very interesting and different.

Alexandre says ...
May 1, 2012 @ 8:45am

Very interesting entry.
I like the approach to tell the story. I'm not sure whether you can wake up though.

kylerhoades says ...
May 1, 2012 @ 10:44am

What the?!

Gornova says ...
May 1, 2012 @ 7:50pm

weird but good, I'm not sure what's going on :(

May 7, 2012 @ 7:09pm

I'm not quite sure... what?

May 8, 2012 @ 8:40am

Yikes, that was pretty brutal. Interesting way of examining the Holocaust.

Shifty says ...
May 8, 2012 @ 7:50pm

Original with a real depth. A bit of sound (music overall) would have made it really great. Good Job.

ehtd says ...
May 12, 2012 @ 4:43pm

quite interesting

KevinWorkman says ...
May 12, 2012 @ 5:24pm

This was a great take on the theme, and it's good to see games that aren't just games. It would be nice to see this explored a little further, but the post compo version doesn't seem to load for me.

Pitoum says ...
May 15, 2012 @ 2:59pm

#19 Mood *_* Thanks guys !

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