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    Ludum Dare 23

    April 20th-23rd 2012 :: 10 Year Anniversary! :: Theme: Tiny World

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    The world of Marceline - Pitoum - 48 Hour Compo Entry

    ** I'm french. Not an excuse but a fact. I will correct ALL THE MISTAKES after the vote. Sorry. **
    ** DO NOT USE "WEB (IMPROVED)" TO RATE THE GAME, THE ORIGINAL VERSION IS "WEB". **

    Not really finished, but I had to submit something this time. For the 1000 :)

    There isn't really an ending right now. Doesn't work :( Maybe after the vote ?

    This story is inspired by the life of Marceline Loridan-Ivens. An awsome woman.

    LEFT/RIGHT : Move
    UP : Look at
    LETTERS : Answer the questions

    Hope you'll enjoy it a bit.

    *****
    Edit : I'd added the source, but it's an improved version (I forget to keep an old version of it.)

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    Ratings

    #19Mood3.89
    #153Innovation3.53
    #273Graphics3.24
    #373Overall3.08
    #428Theme3.05
    #586Humor1.93
    #599Audio2.00
    #670Coolness47%
    #797Fun2.00

    Comments

    Pitoum says ...
    Apr 23, 2012 @ 12:08am

    BTW : Story inspired by Marceline Loridan-Ivens !

    Pierrec says ...
    Apr 23, 2012 @ 11:12am

    "Happy birds were singing all around" ^^
    The game is weird (in my mind, it means : good). You found a great way to tell a story. Of course, it lacks some polish but I was genuinely happy to play ot

    repstyle says ...
    Apr 23, 2012 @ 1:08pm

    NIce work there ! I like the mood in there and the main character pace.
    Just a bit experimental like i love.

    Pitoum says ...
    Apr 23, 2012 @ 6:11pm

    Thanks guys :)
    I'm working right now to improve it (and correct all the mistakes :$).

    Lythom says ...
    Apr 24, 2012 @ 6:37pm

    Pretty dark (in the story), needs polish but... wahhh ! It makes feel different.
    Unusual story for a game coupled with innovative story telling makes this game a very refreshing experience.
    Thanks for that, good job there.

    Meedoc says ...
    Apr 25, 2012 @ 12:42pm

    Even if it's need polish the overall experience is really pleasant! Nice job!

    Jack says ...
    Apr 25, 2012 @ 8:48pm

    this is weird, depressing and ultimately very interesting. I'd love it if it was a bit more polished

    ilo says ...
    Apr 25, 2012 @ 11:20pm

    Thought-provoking. Fun N/A.

    FredericRP says ...
    Apr 26, 2012 @ 3:05pm

    Challenge completed !
    It was hard to see if I answered right or wrong (but is there right or wrong answer really here ?), but I tried again to test different answers: we strongly feel the mood of the character, that's very well done.

    FredericRP says ...
    Apr 26, 2012 @ 3:07pm

    (by the way.. that's strange to enter 'q' on an azerty keyboard to answer 'a')

    racarate says ...
    Apr 26, 2012 @ 11:32pm

    Outstanding, one of my favorite entries so far. If only you had music! Or maybe that was intentional...

    Pitoum says ...
    Apr 29, 2012 @ 9:48pm

    Thanks all !
    I'm currently working on an improved version of the game (I will release it on Kongregate I think).
    It's WIP here : http://serv003.pitoum.net/worldofmarceline/

    @ilo : Yeah no fun I give you that :)

    @racarate : I didn't have the time to add music. Now there is but i'm not sure it's a good thing :)

    @Jack : Hope you'll like the new stuff !

    @Fred : Not really a good way right now. It'll be a few different endings though.

    uberneen says ...
    Apr 30, 2012 @ 9:43pm

    My first thought was, "I'm a slightly less androgynous David Bowie!"
    It didn't take long for that to pass. I'd love to see you do a little more with this. It's already a very deep and moving experience, a little polish would make it powerful indeed.

    wibblymat says ...
    Apr 30, 2012 @ 11:37pm

    Didn't give a humor rating. Didn't seem appropriate!

    Fireblend says ...
    May 1, 2012 @ 2:44am

    So, not sure how to rate this, but whatever it was you made, you did a very fine job.

    Nick Cash says ...
    May 1, 2012 @ 3:54am

    Very interesting and different.

    Alexandre says ...
    May 1, 2012 @ 8:45am

    Very interesting entry.
    I like the approach to tell the story. I'm not sure whether you can wake up though.

    kylerhoades says ...
    May 1, 2012 @ 10:44am

    What the?!

    Gornova says ...
    May 1, 2012 @ 7:50pm

    weird but good, I'm not sure what's going on :(

    May 7, 2012 @ 7:09pm

    I'm not quite sure... what?

    May 8, 2012 @ 8:40am

    Yikes, that was pretty brutal. Interesting way of examining the Holocaust.

    Shifty says ...
    May 8, 2012 @ 7:50pm

    Original with a real depth. A bit of sound (music overall) would have made it really great. Good Job.

    ehtd says ...
    May 12, 2012 @ 4:43pm

    quite interesting

    KevinWorkman says ...
    May 12, 2012 @ 5:24pm

    This was a great take on the theme, and it's good to see games that aren't just games. It would be nice to see this explored a little further, but the post compo version doesn't seem to load for me.

    Pitoum says ...
    May 15, 2012 @ 2:59pm

    #19 Mood *_* Thanks guys !

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