December 16th-19th 2011 :: Theme: Alone

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I Fly Alone

by carloshellin - 48 Hour Compo Entry

This is my first game :)
A bird needs your help to find his family and food. Be careful with the food!

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Ratings

#375Mood2.27
#380Audio2.08
#472Theme2.29
#519Community2.00
#536Graphics2.07
#572Overall2.14
#582Innovation1.77
#587Humor1.25
#646Fun1.54
#685Coolness0%

Comments

cjke.7777 says ...
Dec 19, 2011 @ 7:47am

Great for your first attempt. Probably needed to be tied together a bit - maybe some instructions or a title screen. Good job

rawbits says ...
Dec 20, 2011 @ 9:09am

Not bad at first. At last it's seems finished. :) But maybe a little better graphics for the food, some instructions, hidding the mouse cursor and restart option on end. Anyway it's nice!

kato9 says ...
Dec 20, 2011 @ 10:01pm

Really cool particle snow effect. I couldn't really understand what I was supposed to do though. Needs some more specific instructions.

JoeCool says ...
Dec 21, 2011 @ 11:54pm

Quite good for a first game. Keep it up! :)

wgemigh says ...
Dec 22, 2011 @ 2:16am

The snow was great and the sound really helped the feel of being alone in a blizzard. I wasn't sure what I was supposed to be doing, since gathering the dots didn't seem to do anything and when my hunger got to zero the game seemed to reset. With a little more explanation, though, it could be a fun diversion.

marudziik says ...
Dec 24, 2011 @ 9:58am

The entry would be fine, if not for the music (at the end of your game you state it is done by someone else) and lack of the source. This is compo after all.
I've played a couple of times and still have no idea what do points mean, as they seem to change pretty randomly. Also, the game is *very* similar to what comes out of episode 9 of Flashpunk Tutorials by Zachary Lewis. I know this is your first game, but some diversity would be great.
A pity there's not a single entry in your journal.

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