It's a maze game with things that shoot at you and obstacles that delay you, it kept me on my toes with running and dodging, i did eventually die, it felt like i wasn't really progressing, seeing the same graphics over and over

I liked the game, especially the sentence on the first platform: "First line of this story"

Good game, but I think the level design could be improved a little, also checkpoints, hearts and reduced difficulty would make the game more "beatble" :D

It took me a while to figure out that I had to move the screen and my little guy.
I liked the story spots.

I got lost *cries*. =) I realy enjoyed getting lost in this maze game. Having an automatic camera would be great but this is an awesome work for a 48h entry nonetheless. The hero is very cute and the graphics are neat overall.
This is a wonderfull first entry! Keep giving us games :P.

Nice :) I was a little bit lost not knowing what to do but I still enjoyed it.

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