December 16th-19th 2011 :: Theme: Alone

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Punished

by StormForce - 48 Hour Compo Entry

Wonder went went wrong as you explore Punished, a game about redemption.

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Ratings

#326Community2.50
#418Mood2.11
#461Audio1.75
#543Theme2.08
#627Fun1.58
#646Overall1.83
#661Graphics1.58
#685Coolness0%
#691Innovation1.25

Comments

xilefian says ...
Dec 19, 2011 @ 2:27pm

It was way too short, not so...engrossing. Feels like you did it in a minute in paint and GM.

StormForce says ...
Dec 22, 2011 @ 4:16am

Right. If you took the time to look at my timelapse, you'd see it took me way longer than a minute. Don't be ignorant.

_ferritt says ...
Dec 22, 2011 @ 5:56pm

Point and click adventure game, really could use some explanation as to a plot to give the player some engagement.
Controls work well.
Music track does get a little irritating.
Graphics are not good but functional.

Aaron says ...
Dec 25, 2011 @ 12:57am

Congrats on your first dare, StormForce. I understand that criticism can be quite tough, but please try to take comments with a grain of salt. Some critics might not understand that not everybody is as gifted as they are at art.

I think it was a solid entry, specially for your first. One of my biggest mistakes on my first dare was not taking the time to make sure my game always engaged players as well, and I hope to encourage you to allocate some more time at the end to make everything extra shiny. You want to show off everything you did, right? Guiding the player through all the cool stuff you did in a way so that the player doesn't know that they're being guided--is kind of what good gameplay is. Best of luck. :)

jfroco says ...
Dec 26, 2011 @ 4:58pm

Congratulations for finishing you first LD48 game. It's a very short game and I didn't really understand what was happenning :)

caranha says ...
Jan 2, 2012 @ 11:17pm

I feel there was a deep message hidden somewhere here... but I couldn't find it. Maybe next time you should make something that let players feel that their choice matters -- or at least seems to matter.

commando says ...
Jan 4, 2012 @ 8:35pm

As a first time LDer I can relate to the shortness of your game. I sort of understood what was going on, which is always good. For a first entry, I'd say this is very respectable!

Benjamin says ...
Jan 4, 2012 @ 8:53pm

I like this game ! I'm not sure I understood everything but I liked the atmosphere. If your game was a movie I would say I like the direction ^_^

Dan C says ...
Jan 7, 2012 @ 1:14am

I like it. It tells a story, succinctly.

Raptor85 says ...
Jan 8, 2012 @ 2:20am

as with most GM games, sound does not work so i can't properly rate.

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